Monday, July 10, 2006
Entries were few this time around. I'm attributing that to the holiday week. Usually, more of my co-workers at the newspaper participate. Unfortunately, our state government was shut down for a few days over an impasse on the budget. That kept all of us extremely busy. Not the best environment for creativity.
So without further ado... here are the results...
in october crisp
don't wear any underwear
yet frost may persist
Tiffany Laine De Mott
Whether with ketchup,
mayonnaise, mustard or salt,
I like freedom fries.
Michael Etz
one
day
freedom
will come home
to roost inside
the walls of my purple garden
Amystery written in the fibonacci style. - Fancy!
In the mightiest
of temples the tiniest
gnat flies unfettered
Joel Pisetzner (also refered to as "The Editor" on this blog)
The next two are both by me:
Run up my freak flag
I'll dance in the produce aisle
Wave at onlookers
Open to failure
Bombing never looked so good
Doing is enough
The last three are all by Glenn Redus:
Truths self-evident:
blistered weenies on the grill
lemonade, ice cream
Most on July Fourth
will have picnics, fireworks, sex.
Me? I'll write headlines
On July the Fourth
our forefathers told the king
to go fuck himself
When I sent out the call for entries, one reply was hilarious. "I'd rather rub Haiku in my hair. No thanks." For those of you who are interested in or are new to haiku and want to know more a good site to cruise around is One Deep Breath. It gives you a weekly theme to work on.
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2 Comments:
i wrote dozens of elvis-inspired haiku for a friend's gd project. she had to create a book. she printed two, one for me, one for her, but i haven't received my copy. i fear it is buried somewhere. first she married, then she bought a house, so who knows where my elvis haiku are? i love haiku though. i'm glad you're spreading it around, making others love it too!
Oh, lord, those are good. but that reply is hysterical!
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